Revisions 11.15

I messed up with the whole peer evaluation part of the assignment. I didn't change anything in my paper because I didnt even look at my email until last night. Therefore I didnt send my peer his eval, which I thought I would give to him in class today. But anyway I read through my eval this morning and thought it was very helpful. When I go to revise my paper for my portfolio I will take his points into considersation because I think that it will benefit my paper. I think my facts are the strongest points of my paper because they really enhance the issue that I am discussing and why there needs to be change. I am a concerned with my analysis, because I quoted so many people, they discussed everything that I would say. I just didnt think I would be allowed to say it without citing someone, so I did. Maybe I will change that for my final essay.